Haikus from a Bugeye Ride

[BugeyeNJ58]

Went for a ride up river to get some ice cream. My wife wrote these two haikus:

HAIKU #1
Hair whips 'round my head
Eyes close and I imagine
I'm twenty again

HAIKU #2
Cruising down Main Street
Man with laundry smiles and waves
I wave back and grin

 

[Sarastro]

Hey, those are pretty good. I think she's got a new calling.

I especially like no. 1.

 

[jlaird]

Yea, wish I was 20 again.

 

[Billm]

Jack
You will ALWAYS be 20!!

 

[tdskip]

Cool

 

[vagt6]

I really don't wanna be 20 again, but if riding in my LBC would make me about 40 again, I'd never get out . . . :lol:

 

[Bayless]

 

[jaegzie]

Im still in my 20s does that count!

 

[Morris]

I love haiku!

 

[mightymidget]

HAIKU

?? ok explain this to a low country boy
is it abrevation? cause I sure can not find it in my desk Dictionary

I have figured out it is a short expression of an emotional feeling that seem to be different than actual reality caused by the current surroundings expressed in a sonnet

 

[drooartz]

Haiki: a form of Japanese poetry

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

 

[JPSmit]

I love haiku!

gesundheit

Summer season here
an evening drive cut short
Lucas laughs again

 

[Morris]

Wind and sweat in hair
The road is felt in the hands
And in the heart, too

 

[jlaird]

Miles and miles of smiles
Smiles for miles and miles
Bugeyes

 

[bthompson]

I like that, but technically not a Haiku: the syllables have to be 5-7-5. If I may plagarize it?....

Miles and miles of smiles
Smiles for miles and miles and miles
My Bugeye smiles too.

 

[bthompson]

Rain drips on my legs
My hood's seams all leak water
Spridget in a storm

 

[bthompson]

Fire up the car,
I want to drive to some tunes--
Radio is gone!


(Hey this is fun--thanks for this thread!!)

 

[Gundy]

Kick the wide fat tires
Light up the evil combustion hade's fires
Screamin' Mimi is about to cut loose

 

[Morris]

Rain drips on my legs
My hood's seams all leak water
Spridget in a storm

This is a perfect. You win haiku!

Now you will have super lucky big fun time!

 

[bthompson]

:laugh: And some more...


Put oil in one end--
Oil leaks out the other end.
That's the Spridget way.


Redlined my Midget
Fifteen Hundred, drove it hard!
Thrust washer fell out.