I have used muriatic acid to remove rust and it will indeed work but the fumes are a bit much. Ventilate well not just for your health but to keep down the amount of hydrogen in your local work area.
OK, I like POR but it's time for my usual warning and caveats. They probably come too late for this thread. POR is good stuff but it is NOT good on smooth, sound metal. It needs a surface with teeth to anchor itself well. Acid etching goes a long way toward this, but sandblasting BEFORE using the metal ready works better. The important thing is DO NOT rush the acid etch part of the preparation. Keep the surfaces wet as LONG AS POSSIBLE with the Metal Ready to develop deep etching and a rich, dark grey color.
BTW, water will not neutralize the acid it only dilutes it. You do not need to, or want to, neutralize the Metal Ready. You do want to wash it off thoroughly then wipe the panel dry quickly with a cloth. You WILL get flash rust on the surface. This is NOT a problem for POR. Just make sure you wipe the panel dry so you don't get a heavy curtain of rust.
I cannot stress enough that POR is not a fast process. Preparation is the key to painting success and with POR this applies even more. Don't rush it. I like POR but it's not a product for those in a hurry and it's not for smooth, sound metal.
Good luck with your tank. BTW, if you find you have any through pin-holes that need patching, their tank liner kit is the BOM. I like their tank liner kit more than the KREEM product I used previously.