Keenan, make sure that your pics are actually uploaded onto the blogger server. The error message that we're getting says that the links are looking on our own computers for your pics (localhost is your own computer). In other words, the links might work for you, but they're not going to for us.
Here's a better idea, and will save you from having to post a slew of links: open up an account on Photobucket.com. Its a free photo hosting site and you can upload your pics into an album. You can give us the link to the album, and that's that. We'll be able to see all of your pics. Hope this helps!