I am kinda embarrassed to show these pictures because the car is dirty. This car is my daily driver that is sometimes put up in the barn when my shop is full. I took the air cleaners off to see better plus there are gas stains and WD40 all over. Anyways, first I cannot tell if it is camera angle or not, but the cable holder on the front carb in your pictures looks bent. Next the brass linkage should be vertical or perpendicular to the carb when off. Next when adjusting the cable just slid long clamping pin in and out of the hole on the brass linage, so the fiddling is reduced. Plus there is some load on the choke, so that when you slid the pin it you will have to push the brass linkage back. The brass linkage for the preload is important and is set forward maybe ½ inch and then pulled back slightly to put the front cable clamping pin in the hole ( just leave cotter key off for a while) and that will give the vertical position of the brass linkage and the preload is critical, so push thing the brass linkage arms forward and then pull them back to vertical position and re- install the pin to the brass linkage holder; it should work fine after that. I can pull my choke out with 2 fingers. Moreover, I have seen chokes that where simply too long, but do not cut yours just yet. I posted a picture of the brass holder also, but it is not too critical to have the extra cable if not too much a little should be ok under the dash.
Peace out