Ken,
To ME as it is, your ad is too cumbersom and laborious to
read through.
Personally, I started reading and after the first 5 lines,
I quit, and I am more about modified Austin Healeys than
most car people you will find. I run the Modified Austin
Healey Registry web site (
www.modifiedhealeys.org)
You are not looking for an Austin Healey purist here.
You are looking for a Gear Head with an interest and some
money. I don't think that they will take the time to wade
through the minutia of your ad.
There is way, WAY, <span style="font-weight: bold">WAY</span> too much detail up front.
I'd start with 4-5 IMPORTANT bullets items up front,
for example, the car, the engine & driveline, the body &
paint, the drivability... Then if MUCH more detail
(about the radio for example) is important to you, put it
down below the bullets so that <span style="font-weight: bold">only</span> those who are
REALLY interested have to take the time to read it.
Just MY opinion, but you asked....
Ken, I LOVE your car and I'd be glad to put your car in
the "Cars For Sale" section of the Modified healeys web site.
I also suggest that you submit your ad to the magazines of the
TWO National Clubs - AHCA & AHCUSA.
Tim -
www.modifiedhealeys.org